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--- Zitat von: Der Läuterer am 20.08.2020 | 08:31 ---So gehts also auch und macht definitiv wenig Arbeit.

[...] a strange-looking weather-beaten man, [...] smoking a long-stemmed pipe curiously carved. His legs were stretched out before him, showing high boots of supple leather that fitted him well, but had seen much wear and were now caked with mud. A travel-stained cloak of heavy dark-green cloth was drawn close about him, and in spite of the heat of the room he wore a hood that overshadowed his face; but the gleam of his eyes could be seen as he watched the hobbits. [...]
He is one of the wandering folk - Rangers we call them [...]
[...] he's known round here as Strider. Goes about at a great pace on his long shanks; though he don't tell nobody what cause he has to hurry.
[...] threw back his hood, showing a shaggy head of dark hair necked with grey, and in a pale stern face a pair of keen grey eyes.

Weniger ist hier mehr.

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… Arbeit :-)

Das sind Beispiele aus dem Herrn der Ringe, die JRR Tolkien wahrscheinlich Jahrelang immer und immer wieder überarbeitet hat. Weniger ist mehr, aber das richtige weniger zu finden, das dann mehr ist, das ist verdammt schwer.

weather-beaten, stretched out, supple leather, caked with mud, drawn close, gleam of his eye, wandering folk, great pace, shanks, shaggy head, necked with grey, pale stern, keen.

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